
7.27雅思寫作真題思路解析(附7分范文)及 8.1口語寫作預測
7月27日的考試結束,據說這一場考試比較簡單,不知道大家能順利出分么~我們先來看一下這一次由老師帶來的寫作范文解析~
07-27混合類–教育話題
Some parents give their children everything that their children ask for or they want to do.Is this good for children?What could be consequences for these children when they grow up?
題目大意:
有些父母滿足孩子的一切要求。這對孩子好嗎?孩子長大后會有什么后果?
思路:
題目有兩個問題,需要明確一一回應,即2個主體段,第一段回應對孩子是否有好處;第二段回應對長大后的影響。
對于第一個問題,建議能用*性思維,對這個抽象的’good’,從不同的角度予以分析后再給出最終定論。如可以從物質滿足的角度,以及孩子全面成長的角度,分別討論后,得出是好是壞。
對于第二個問題,就可以在第一個問題得出的結論,予以展開。
關鍵詞:
Good:是一個含糊抽象的詞,可以從不同角度解讀,再給出最終的定論。
consequences for these children when they grow up:要緊扣對孩子未來的影響,
提綱梳理如下:
范文
It is true that some parents tend to meet all requirements of their children.While people take different attitudes towards the influences on children,I would say whether it is a bless or not is a complicated problem that depends on how we define the meaning of‘good’,and I am also not optimistic to its profound influence on the younger generation.
On the materialistic level,this permissive rearing style is certainly understandable–children who have all their requirements met and are allowed to do whatever they like can fully enjoy the warmth from parents and are more likely to cultivate a stronger self-esteem.Nevertheless,from a more comprehensive perspective,the materialistic satisfaction mentioned above can be considered from an opposite angle:the overindulgence will inevitably lead to many character flaws,say,the lack of self-discipline,the incapability of behavior control,and over reliance on parents,all of which will exert detrimental effects on their later life.
One problem that should attribute to the indulgent parenting is that many of such children are prone to juvenile delinquency.Without self-control of their greed and behaviors,which should have been cultivated at an early age,I doubt these children will obey any regulations or laws when grown up.As well as committing crimes,another apprehension we cannot afford to ignore is the ineptitude,a consequence of their lack of independence since childhood.Such a defect will become the major obstacle in their future careers,from job hunting to problem solving,not to mention the numerous challenges in a competitive adult world.
In conclusion,the relentless responsiveness from parents is detrimental to the younger generation both in their formation of character in childhood and will cast a shadow in their later life.
相關詞匯:
Optimistic樂觀的
Permissive縱容的
Self-esteem自信
Overindulgence溺愛
Reliance依賴
Indulgent溺愛的
Parenting家教
juvenile delinquency少年犯罪
ineptitude無能
Responsiveness回應
8月1日場口語高頻話題
1.去過的公園
Describe a park or garden you visited and liked.
2.理想的房子
Describe an ideal home(house or apartment)that you would like to live in.
3.實用的技能
Describe a practical skill you know.
4.廣告
Describe an advertisement that left you a deep impression
5.喜歡的歌手或樂隊
Describe a singer or band that you like
6.外語說得好的人
Describe a person who speak foreign language well
7.曾經不喜歡的科目
Describe a subject you didn't like before but have interest in now.
8.給別人的建議
Describe a time you gave advice to others.
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Task 1折線圖
Task 2
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7月6日
Task 1柱狀圖
Task 2
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6月29日
Task 1折線圖
Task 2
Some people claim that many things that children are taught at school are a waste of time.Other people argue that everything study at school are useful at some time.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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Task 1柱狀圖
Task 2
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2020年6月13日
Task 1柱狀圖
Task 2
Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment.only governments and large companies can make a difference.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
2020年6月1日
Task 1柱狀圖
Task 2
Human activities have negative effects on plant and animal species.Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem.Others believe effective measures can be taken to improve this situation.Discuss both views and give your opinion.
2020年5月23日
Task 1柱狀圖
Task 2
In many parts of theworld,children and teenagers are committing more crimes.Why do you think thisis the case?How should children and teenagers be punished?
2020年5月18日
Task 1折線圖
Task 2
4 weeks'holiday can make employees do better at job.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
2020年5月11日
Task 1餅圖
Task 2
Most of world’s problems are caused by over-population.To what extent do you agree ordisagree?
